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我的哥哥

作者:门雪 2022年4月22日
作文评论,共10条

牛颖葭(2011/11/26 19:09)鼻子怎么会像火车!你是神童吗?你把你哥哥好像写成一个女的了,鼻子怎么会像火车! .....睡觉怎么看书?。。。。超无语。。。汗啊汗、、

骆乐的家长(2011/11/25 21:33)jjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjghfffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiifffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkmmmmmmmmmmmmmm

李懿恒的家长(2011/11/20 15:14)写出的字太少了

张骁(2011/11/19 14:19)

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应露(2011/11/2 20:42)

许嘉琳的家长(2011/10/30 14:28)夸张。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。无语。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。

曾俊烨(2011/10/9 13:15)鼻子怎么会像火车!你是神童吗?你把你哥哥好像写成一个女的了…… 无语~~~~~~~~~~~~~

张琳(2011/10/4 22:06)写的具体,值得表杨!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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