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喂金鱼

作者:卫小刚 2021年6月18日
作文评论,共10条

胡家伟(2011/6/13 19:17)汗!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

黄浩(2011/6/12 19:08)你在哪买到的鱼?它是仙鱼啊,会说话的.快装柱香吧,阿弥陀佛!

罗子通(2011/6/12 15:33)好笨

劳嘉烯(2011/6/12 15:24)''你吃零食,不一定小鱼也可以吃,小鱼吃鱼料,不能吃零食。我才知道小鱼不能零食''。怎么没有双引号?

吴紫晴(2011/6/12 14:49)冒号打错,怎么没有双引号?这篇作文太笨、太假了

李佳洁(2011/6/12 11:02)太|笨|了

黄若楠(2011/6/11 21:29)

郑海阳(2011/6/11 14:21)超超超超超超超超笨啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊

黄丹蓉(2011/6/11 08:41)太|笨|了。

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