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肚子痛苦记

作者:王文光 2023年1月21日
作文评论,共10条

黄希童(2014/9/26 21:48)你也太背了吧,我吃过几万次了,都没肚子疼。

方梓柔(2014/9/26 21:17)你可真厉害。

官舒怡(2014/9/25 20:01)

陈彬栓(2014/9/24 12:50)无语~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

林俊羲的家长(2014/9/23 11:43)

其實寫作就是在真實事件的基礎上,再發揮想像,手法誇張點。可以接受呀!寫得很好!

贺喜 写道:

Good,写得不错!只是有那么惨吗?

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陈杰荣(2014/9/19 18:27)路口

黄瑜(2014/9/19 12:33)少吃麻辣面

赵凯琳(2014/9/18 20:22)

贺喜(2014/9/16 09:48)Good,写得不错!只是有那么惨吗?

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