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羊奶妈和豹孤儿

作者:彭成壮 2022年1月28日
作文评论,共10条

钟荣桦(2012/5/20 13:30)llllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllli钟荣桦

唐艺雨(2012/5/19 13:25)母爱真伟大

唐艺雨(2012/5/19 13:25)世上只有妈妈好,没妈的孩子象根草。的像字写错了

罗惟馨(2012/5/17 13:00)

居然把粗写成出,真是粗心大意。

骆展鹏 写道:

居然把像写成象,真出心大意。

董文昊(2012/5/16 20:04)好,母爱真伟大,真感人!不过写错了几个字。

翁敏怡(2012/5/15 12:34)有一个错字!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

何文杰(2012/5/14 21:36)100000000000000000000000000000

郭俊宏(2012/5/14 19:54)你也不是粗心大意啊!粗变出?啥意思啊?

郭俊宏(2012/5/14 19:54)你说的真棒,我被你感动了,以前我看到别的作文就骂他,看到你的作文被你感动了,加油@!!!!!!我挺你100分幸福是从家人那来的,友谊是从亲朋好友那来的。
都是来之不易。。。太感人了,但豹孤儿也太没良心了。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。

刘鼎(2012/5/14 11:46)100分,感人。

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