同步课堂 » 作文园地 » 三年级 » 状物作文

小金鱼

作者:彭成壮 2023年6月8日
作文评论,共10条

覃振轩(2013/3/31 18:08)爆数分,真是太好了

幸国平(2013/3/14 08:19)好。

幸国平(2013/3/13 15:13)写的好。

黄浩楠(2013/1/9 12:48)妈妈今天给我买了一只小兔子。  

 

这只小兔子是米黄色的,它的眼睛是红色的,真像两颗红宝石。耳朵长长的,当它听到声音时,小耳朵就竖起来了。三瓣小嘴巴一动一动的,好象在说话。小兔子想出来玩的时候就喀嚓喀嚓的抓笼子。我把它放出来,它就顽皮的跑来跑去。当我想把它抓进笼子里时,它就想逃跑 ,然后我就追它,我们两个就像在玩老鹰捉弄小鸡一样,你跑我追,多么快乐呀! 我的小兔子可爱吧!

杨海琳的家长(2012/12/30 13:47)55555555分

姚宝芸(2012/12/27 17:44)满分

刘柃彤(2012/12/15 21:24)999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999亿分。

刘柃彤(2012/12/15 21:21)好,把小金鱼写的非常可爱。

刘佳宜(2012/11/18 15:51)

黄俊杰(2012/11/18 14:21)

cxz

黄俊杰 写道:

99999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999万分

当前第9页

下一页 上一页 到第
返回作文 | 返回作文园地