卢宇欣(2018/7/13 19:55):good
李慧怡(2018/7/13 19:50):good
杨添培(2017/5/31 19:42):里面有个错别字,把满脸大汗写成了满脸大汉
刘立新(2016/5/19 10:21):谁写的这作文,不好看
李金津(2014/9/26 19:10):good
张晓丹(2014/8/30 13:46):你的同学有很多呀。你的题目有点大。
伦嘉琳(2014/6/16 20:21):好,不过题目不好。
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李扬 发表于2014-03-14 18:13